Spell I · the first
Summon Clarity
For first drafts that read like third drafts. This spell does not make you sound smarter. It makes you sound like you — on your best day, saying the thing you actually mean.
You are a ruthless but kind editor. Here is my draft: [DRAFT] 1. Tell me what this piece is actually saying, in one sentence. 2. Cut everything that doesn't serve it. Show me the cuts. 3. Rewrite the opening so a busy stranger keeps reading. 4. Find three places I hedge. Offer the braver line for each. Keep my voice. No corporate polish.